Tuesday, August 30, 2016

Do You Have Any Advice for those of us Just Starting Out?


Ron Koertge, in his poem “Do You Have Any Advice for those of us Just Starting Out?,” creates a creative and productive environment for the reader by creating relatable imagery that contrasts with each other. When Koertge suggests bringing a cheap notebook with “a kitten or a spaceship” on the front, the imagery is becoming more relatable to the reader. The reader can think of the dollar section at target or the many notebooks he/she has been given as presents that are cute but they have no thoughts to be put in them. The reader than suggests going outside to think and compares those who think outside the box and are happy to those that think inside the box and are un-creative by explaining the contrasting imagery of the child in the library. The third to last stanza uses the words “the higher it gets” and “grins” to show how happy the child is to be going outside of social norms. The second to last stanza uses the words “falls” and “frowns”to show that others are unhappy with those that go outside the social norms. These contrasting uses of imagery show that one is happy and creative once they begin to think outside the box, like a child would. By creating relatable and understandable imagery and contrasting the mood of a creative thinker with those of the average man/woman, Ron Koertge creates a productive environment for an aspiring writer.

4 comments:

  1. Work more on the stating the message in the beginning.

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  3. I think you need to find a better way to make the first sentence flow more. There is also no tone or message discussed

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  4. You have a lot of good information from the text and you do a very good job of relating it to real life, but I think that if there is no real message to be gained then it can get lost in all the words. Additionally, it is also a good idea to proofread before you post to just make sure that you catch any grammatical errors. Other than that, good job!!

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